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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71616
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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I am very glad that you are going to visit my hometown,and wish you have a good time there. As you know,my hometown is a beautiful place,there many good people and some interesting things.In the morning,we go to see the place where the sun rise when we climbed the mountain,and we all breath the fresh air.You will feel the world is so fine.At lunch,you have been eating the delicious food in the countryside.And then you can talk about something with farmers.I believe it's pleasing while both of the culture constantly melt with the process that is filled with hit in their brains.Obliviously, you have a good nap time so that you could have relaxed in the afternoon.In the afternoon,we go to the stream.The water is refreshing and it's cool while you put your hands into the water.Of course,you see some butterflies dancing and birds singing in the tree.I'm sure you fall in love with this place.After walking about three hours we can go somewhere else.Such as that we go for a walk in a narrow path,and talk about what is experienced with life or some view about what happened recently.And then our friendship is stronger than ever further,no matter how to say,I hope you get to like this place. In conclusion,this is the normal life in the countryside.I wish you are coming here soon.

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