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The bar chart below gives information about the average science test scores of Grade 8 students in relation to the number of hours they watch television each day. .
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；请注意分段。
As the society moves forwards,we are surrounded by numerous of advertising,which make our life more interesting. It is obvious that positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects At the macro level,not only does advertisements increase the opportunity of work,but also promote the economico country.At the micro level,on the one hand,advertisements can bridge the gap between consumers and manufacturers,causing the consumption level and consumers demand are promoted.On the other hand,consumers have more selects from the variety of advertisements.What's more,advertisements make consumers relax. Though the parts of advertisements bring some sex and violence as appeals viewers.In a word,the positive effect of advertising outweigh its negative effects.
