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The student Union will organize a volunteering activity during the summer holiday,for which we are recruiting volunteers.The volunteering is for the sake of helping people who are in hunger and need others' help,through which also exercise students' ability to deal with such a task that need teamwork to reconcile the cooperation between volunteers.In brief,what will be done in this activity is that calling for other people to detribute to the poor by putting a volunteering box to collect people's money.The activity will start at 8 a.m. on the square and whoever is late shouldn't take part in anymore.If you take interests in this activity,please call the number 187583094