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Free admission to museums Nowadays,there are more and more museums which have the free admission for the people.What is the purpose of them?In my opinion,the museums want everyone to have chance to know these things which our ancestors created. However,there are also some disadvantages.In this essay,I will talk about them.At first,the museums will have many persons.The museums will be too crowded to visit.Then the many important things which in the meseums can not be a good protective.They will fall in an unsafe environment.Last but not least,if everyone can get in the museums,there will be a big porblem that the homeless persons will get in and have a rest which maybe let the museums confuse. So,I have some suggests for these museums.First of them is that we should control the traffic.The second is that the museum officials should make sure the person's information who wants to visit the museum.At last,they should let visitors keep the museums clean.Whatever,I think the free admission to museums is a good thing for many people.
