2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(69)写作:我的朋友李雷

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i have a good friend his name is lilei he is fourteen now.he likes sports very much,such as playing basketball,swimming,drawing and listening to music.his favorite star is michael jordan but mine is meixi, and his favorite food is fish and chips.he is tall with big eyes,short and straight hair.his character is medium