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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12931
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章层次较为清晰;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

face to face communication With the development of the economic ,our living standards continue to improve.In the network ages,evertone families have one or more both computer and phone.Abrove the picture ,we can knoe that our life style have changed from face to face communcition to chat on internet.In the picture parents asked their son come downstairs for someing to eat by internet. As the saying goes"Everything has two side".It is likely to the internet ,on the one hand ,internet bring some help for us ,such as ,it can early to contact our parents and our friends,it can help us studies as tool,last but no least,it can life become extreme convenienve.On the other hand,it has serious infuence our life,the radiation has effect our body health,the worst of our eye . In my opinion,we shouldn't spare much time to internet

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