2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；文中从句数量过少；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

If a foreign friend is going to visit my hometown. i will take him/her to the beautiful place of lake xihu,the bitching place I never seen The lake of xihu is the beautiful in the world.Not only foreign friend can enjoy beautiful scenic,but also can experience different custom. Only in this way can spread our chinese culture.