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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了。
In my opinion, if we do that we can become smart customers. Do you know what customer is a smart customer? In my opinion, a smart customer can save money in daily life. In modern society, we always spend our money in each place. But as students,we have not much money, so we should study to save money. For example, I always buy clothes in a sale. Althoug the clothes may be no so beautiful, they may me save money. I think we can spend the little money but the clothes which we buy are so good. When I wear sale clothes, my parents very happy, because I spend the little money bought it. When we spend the little money, we can also save our parents money. At the same time. I think we can become a smart customer if we save money in our daily life. When we go to some places, we also take the bus instead of the taxi. Because take the bus can save our money and so on. So I think if we study to save money, we may be bacome a smart customer. A smart customer is not you buy something you like, but you spend little money buy something you need.
