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As students, we always try to save our money in daily life. For example, we collect all kinds of coupons and we do not buy clothes unless in a sale and so on. If we do this we can become smart customers. Do you know what customer is a smart customer? In my opinion, a smart customer can save money in daily life. In modern society, we always spend our money in each place. But as students,we have not much money, so we should study to save money. For example, I always buy clothes in a sale. Althoug the clothes may be no so beautiful, they may me save money. I think we can spend the little money but the clothes which we buy are so good. When I wear sale clothes, my parents very happy, because I spend the little money bought it. When we spend the little money, we can also save our parents money. At the same time. I think we can become a smart customer if we save money in our daily life. When we go to some places, we also take the bus instead of the taxi. Because we take the bus can save money I think if we learn to save money, we may become a smart customer. A smart customer is not you buy something you like, but you spend the little money buying something you need.
