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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中词汇使用灵活，可是在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
AS is shown above,in the middle of the picture standing two young people that are express difference motion with a box of down foot front and pour out many waters,there has been a heated discussion about this picture in the newspaper recently.The picture,at the first glimpse,seems to be simple,but only a penetrating sight can pierce through lis superficial meaning. Undoubtedly,the picture tell us that nothing can compared with hopeful attitude,when is comes to the personal growth,especially in this ever rapidly changes modern society.in on country other than China,it has been said that is the phenomenon more obvious.what's more,the public attaches due attention to hopeful attitude.Among all the touching fact relating to attitude that i have heard,noticed and experienced,the most impressive one is Hellen,he was born blind,throughout all his life,he never give up aim and persistence with the face in difficulties,he keeps learn how to read and write untill he became a fomous writer envunturally.so perseveres is vital factor of successful when we encounter brouble. TO sum up,we are supposed by positive attitude to enjoy life,likewise,the government should develop education to lead young people shaped a correct outlook life.Here is a rule of thumb:don't be afraid to be difficulty,and be confident that your persistence may be a magic weapon to succeed
