作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;全文结构较为严谨。
Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags A few years ago,the disposable plastic bags are used widely.At that time,everyone likes using the dosposable plastic bags because they are very convenient. But there is a big problem if we do that with a long time.Because the plastic resolves very hardly or even can not resolve.In a short time,it maybe doesn't matter.But the plastic will damage to the environment of the earth if we use too many disposal bags or too long.If there are many disposal bags to pile up like a mountain,we must deal with them.Of course, we have two choices to dispose them.One is to dury the disposable plastic bags underground.But it will destroy the ground's ecological balance.To be other words,it will make some species which living underground to wipe out or even that the ground can not grow the plants in the future.In a word,if we use the disposal bags too much and too long,it will make a big problem for our world. So we have to limit the use of disposal bags to protect our environment and keep our keep our world clean.