2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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In my mind,China is a beautiful city there are so many interesting place.Now,I will tell you someting about my hometown. I born in LiPING Guizhou.I llove my hometown,not only I come form here but also there are something, such as Grand choirs,drum-tower，natural bridge,kipper,brawn, It's said,It is bigest bridge in the china or word;kam Grand choirs. In short,If you have a chance,I will take you to vist my hometown and take you to eat cate.I think it will be a pleasant trip.