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2001年专四作文真题:Travel broadens the mind

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:18浏览次数:5981
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Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come toknow the significance of travel through our own experience.
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Travel Broadens the Mind
You are to write in threeparts: 
In the first part, state clearlywhat your view is.
In the second part, support yourview with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what youhave written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded forcontent, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow theinstructions may result in a loss of marks.
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文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨。

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Nowadays,travel has become a indispensable part of our life.Primarily it is the way people to release their pressure,later,it becomes a fashion in our daily life.Some people think it is a superficial behavior that to see outside.While others inist that it is a new notion of defining the life which can't comparable in books. I reside in a poor village,so I look forward the outside word.I know it from books with curiosity and happiness.But I still think I can't touch it or know it actually.In my opinion,I think travel is profound for everyone.Not only acknowledge the world,but also broaden our mind.In other ways,travel has been an new congnitive in modern society.It can also reveal that travel has a lot of advantages for people to make it became the fundamental lifestyle on vacation.It helps people to see the world, to think the world,to feel the world which change the stereotype to know the world. In a word,we can learn a lot from the process of travel.It is not redundant,but meaningful to our life.

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