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Nowadays,travel has become a indispensable part of our life.Primarily it is the way people to release their pressure,later,it becomes a fashion in our daily life.Some people think it is a superficial behavior that to see outside.While others inist that it is a new notion of defining the life which can't comparable in books. I reside in a poor village,so I look forward the outside word.I know it from books with curiosity and happiness.But I still think I can't touch it or know it actually.In my opinion,I think travel is profound for everyone.Not only acknowledge the world,but also broaden our mind.In other ways,travel has been an new congnitive in modern society.It can also reveal that travel has a lot of advantages for people to make it became the fundamental lifestyle on vacation.It helps people to see the world, to think the world,to feel the world which change the stereotype to know the world. In a word,we can learn a lot from the process of travel.It is not redundant,but meaningful to our life.
