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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33610
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
评语:

能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

With the development of economy, people's living standard has been improved day by day.But at the same time,the price of various products also increased in a rapid speed. In this condition, how to be a smart consumer has become a focus. In my opinion, i am the strong oppent of the behaviour of saving money in a rigid way. As a saying goes, spending money correctly is equal with saving money. But that doesn't means people can buy all things they want,but things that are essential for them. We live in this world and we are responsible for our own health and we have duty to satisfy our basic needs.For instance, if you don't eat breakfast because of saving money, you doesn't realize the essence of saving. For Chinese, we are all familiar with thrift, which is one of the virtues that we appeal for. However, the real meaning of thrift,in my opinion,is to save money that you don't need to spend. From this aspect, we all should learn to save. But the reality is not the same as it, many students treat saving as a pursuit, they save the money that are not supposed to. They mixes thrift with saving money, and the more,the better,they think. I can not deny the behaviour of saving money, but i think all of us should learn how to be a smart saver and spending money in right way. Dont's save money just out of saving.

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