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能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。
With the development of economy, people's living standard has been improved day by day.But at the same time,the price of various products also increased in a rapid speed. In this condition, how to be a smart consumer has become a focus. In my opinion, i am the strong oppent of the behaviour of saving money in a rigid way. As a saying goes, spending money correctly is equal with saving money. But that doesn't means people can buy all things they want,but things that are essential for them. We live in this world and we are responsible for our own health and we have duty to satisfy our basic needs.For instance, if you don't eat breakfast because of saving money, you doesn't realize the essence of saving. For Chinese, we are all familiar with thrift, which is one of the virtues that we appeal for. However, the real meaning of thrift,in my opinion,is to save money that you don't need to spend. From this aspect, we all should learn to save. But the reality is not the same as it, many students treat saving as a pursuit, they save the money that are not supposed to. They mixes thrift with saving money, and the more,the better,they think. I can not deny the behaviour of saving money, but i think all of us should learn how to be a smart saver and spending money in right way. Dont's save money just out of saving.