邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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there were some voicient inccident in our campus scien 2010,which made peopie frithend.as a result,meny people bore in mind ;what shouldwe do to improve thesafety. in my opinion,foremost and first,school has the responsibie to educte students some simpl tips which can prote thenselves.for exambie , donnot go out at night.next,it will be nice if students all become good friends.last but not laest,parent also should tell students some theory. in a word ,the satety isbuilt by everyone.