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如今很多动物处于濒危状态, 请你分析一下造成很多动物处于濒危状态的原因。作为中学生, 提出保护动物的倡议。.
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in recently many people realize that more and more animle have in danger and maybe will disappeared in the future when we are seen animal by someone shoot , we should to protect the animal from danger of course why are a lot of people want to kill animals i think that have a impoterant reason t is that it can make a lot of money
