2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦161:濒危动物

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ProtectingAnimals Animals are our friends. But many animals are in danger, such as pandas, elephants, whales and so on. Why are they in danger? Because some people kill them for their meat or money. And not enough clean water, food and places are also problems. I think animals are so lovely that we must protect them. We should be friendly to them. It’s a good idea to stop taking away their lands and making water dirty. We need to help the animals live in peace. Let’s save them.