2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用高级词汇;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Computer offers many movies,novels,music,etc.Sometimes we spent lots of time in computer to playing games and watching movies so we enough time to learning.Computer radiation is bad for our eyes because it reduces our vision. If we spent more time sit in front of computer,it influences our health. some hackers of foreign invade our computer to intercept country's secret and intelligence,intimidate our country security. We need cost too much money to buy new computer and Internet traffic.