2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Computer offers many movies,novels,music,etc.Sometimes we spent lots of time in computer to playing games and watching movies so we enough time to learning.Computer radiation is bad for our eyes because it reduces our vision. If we spend a lot of time to sitting in front of computer will affect our health.Some hackers of foreign invade our computer to intercept country's secret and intelligence,it intimidates our country's security. We need cost too much money to buy new computer and Internet traffic.