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Nowadays,human has realized that plants and animals species have suffered from negative effect by human activities.There are two different views of this situation.One view is that it is so deniable that we can do nothing to solve this problem,the other view is effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. The reason why some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem is human produce pollution doing harm to plants and animal species.For example,the polluted air and water made by factories,was used directly by plants and animals causing many species died out every year.Moreover,many people love to hunt for the rare animals decreasing the animal species.Plenty of animal species died out and human can not do anything to rescue them. The other people hold a positive view that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation.With the development of economy,human race has improved advanced technology.For instance,people can invent some medical to cure the sick animals and to improve their living environment.What's more,the laws made for protecting animals,were unperfect.Many people who hunt for the rare animals,have not been punished by the laws. To sum up,plants and animal species were suffered from negative effect by human activities,and people hold two hostile views about this situation.In my opinion,I advote the positive view for we could act for something to reduce the effection before all animals died out.
