如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者在高级词汇方面要多下功夫,有些单词拼错了;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
There are thousands of hundres languages in the world. Every country has their mother language. What's more, a country has many kind of dealects. For instance, China is a developing country with huge land. Almost every province has their own dealects, some of them have more than one kind of dialect. Recently, a hot topic about dialects have aroused a controvercy. Are dialects just as acceptable in public places? Some people suppose that it is not impilte to speak dialects in public places. Other people hold the different view. As far as I concern, I advocate that it is not such a big deal to speak dialects in public places. I have some reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, different dialects can rich culture. Language is a fundation in human's life. Every kind of dialects have its own history and culture deposits. It is not adpotable to discard dialects for advocating speaking official language. IFwe get use to speaking mandarin in our daily life, dialects would fade out in the world. Nowadays, some schools claim that students should speak mandarin in school, which leads to a result that many students can't speak local dialects. Secondly, Dialects is as a kind of symbol in every province. people will be pleased to make a acquaintance with people who grow up in the same land when they are in a strange city. Dialects can make people with same dialects feel warm. people can make friends according to their accent and dialects in a strange city. Besides, when people want to say a secreat with friend in the public palces, they can speak dialects when people around can't not follow what he says. Thirdly, some people hold dispproval think that it it offensive to speak dialects in public places. In my opinion, speaking dialects is far away from speaking dirty words. Speaking dialects is also a kind of language, it is not fair to allow to speak mandarin while forbid dialects in public places. What we should forbid is speaking offensive words or dirty words and talking loudly in public places. To conclude, dialects are acceptable in public places. Dialects is a kind of language, culure, symbol in the world. Different notes makes a beautiful song. We should deliver dialects to next generation. Dialects should not be forgortten by local people. Morever, Dialects can be a decoration for a city.