2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强。

It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket As for us,how we can put the eggs in the basket that can protect the eggs not bad. Somebody think put the eggs in one basket not only can save resoure,but also can save us power.But a little of people againt that beacuse they think if put many eggs in one basket which can't be good at protect the eggs,So they think if we have many eggs that we shouldn't only put in one basket.But if we can't make eggs put in one basket so what we should do. In my opinion.Firstly,I suggested that the people could put the eggs in many basket but it could use our many power.In order to solver that problem which we can put many soft things in the basket which can be good at protect the eggs.Ectect this words,there are many words to solver this problem.