2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；词汇表达丰富度要注意，不过单词拼写错误较多。

In my hometown,mostly fomours budlding is the nuclea weonpons stock.where stored many of nucela weonpons rock,that was prepard for the U.S,so my foresgn friend who are come from the U.S should interest to it .ensure,I want to show our country military power to his,let his don't to invasion my home,while I born in 1993,but I kown the U.S had have stguggle to my country in 1950,our materland had been suffer hundered and thounsands people die.