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i have very happy with my classmate and teacher ,at first i thought that i could't suit new life but i was wrong my teacher and classmate very polite for me they are always asked me did you have some problem of new school life , because of this i have more encourage and confident , i have been leaning english for ten years and i will keep to learn english hardly in the future as well know english still important in all over the world .althought i have a little diffcultile for learn english but i still have confident in my mind
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