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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2269
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强。

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The Internet Nowadays,the Internet become more and more popular so that more and more persons use it to learn,work or to play.On the one hand,some people think that learning or working on the Internet can be efficient.However,on the other hand,other people believe the Internet will make the young persons wallow,and then they will always want to play instead of studying.In fact,it is very hard to say that the Internet is good for people or not. To my opinions,everything has advantages and disadvantages.Firstly,the Internet is a good thing if you can use it in aright.there are much information which you will need on the Internet.Then,if you really want to use it to study or to work,it is very convenient because you can use it everywhere.Of course,the place must have the way to connect to Internet.Whatever,there is also much bad information on the Internet.It maybe makes a person become bad.Lastly,if you really want to learn something,please use the Internet,but you want to play only,please do not.

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