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The Internet Nowadays,the Internet become more and more popular so that more and more persons use it to learn,work or to play.On the one hand,some people think that learning or working on the Internet can be efficient.However,on the other hand,other people believe the Internet will make the young persons wallow,and then they will always want to play instead of studying.In fact,it is very hard to say that the Internet is good for people or not. To my opinions,everything has advantages and disadvantages.Firstly,the Internet is a good thing if you can use it in aright.there are much information which you will need on the Internet.Then,if you really want to use it to study or to work,it is very convenient because you can use it everywhere.Of course,the place must have the way to connect to Internet.Whatever,there is also much bad information on the Internet.It maybe makes a person become bad.Lastly,if you really want to learn something,please use the Internet,but you want to play only,please do not.