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As a popular saying goes ," don't put all eggs in one basket,"we can see that there exist danger during we investing new businness. Nowadays,with the fast growth of enconomic,more and more people are in rich.Those who own a big asset are enger to investing all asset to new objections ,because they are too addictted to get big success in the short period without analysising carefully situation and possible outsome ,so that they would lose more than what they get .For example,when people treating purchase investments as first career vast all money into a unsafe investment,and they will face either suceess or failure .But if they fail the investment ,what all they have would disappear ,for the lack of wealth ,it's too hard for they to get up for another investment . So I think that it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.How to avoid these problems arise our concerns.In my opinion ,when doing investment ,investors should put small part of assets into new investment ,and focus on the following situation .when situation is good ,they can consider putting more money into the same subject ,if it is not,they should turn to another investment ,by doing which,they will have more chaces to success and less losses.
