2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

You must spend fifty Yuan on buy the ticket when you want into the museum. This time, I always have a question why I must spend the money for this ticket. The museum belongs to our government and my parents pay the taxes to government, so the museum must be free for Citizens. But I have two questions to ask some people. One question, if the museum is free, its management is out of control. When some people go into it, they will take some rubbish anywhere. And then no one will clean it. In the end, the museum will be very dirty. Another question, because a few securities to protect the museum, it will be stolen. In fact, my advice is free and charge. When students go into the museum, its fee is free. And when others want into it, it is charge. And the local government will offer the management charge to the museum. Or they difficultly manage the museum.