2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(108):阳光体育活动

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用偏少；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。

Recently the problem of a national student sports program has been brought into focus,as well know you will have a strong body if you keep do sport everyday it is very dangers that you keep seat and play computer so we need to take one hours to do sport such as you can run with you friends or swim in pool but some students have a problem that take away one hours to do sport whether or good or not in hight school but i can confirm to tell you you are wrong because you can no be able to hard work if you not have a strong body and not to enjoy studying we may never avoid be-coming old but we may delay the time we become old