2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦159:学生进网吧

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；复杂句采用很棒；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

with THE INTERNET having become an indispensable part of modern people,s life,it enjoys great popularity,especially among yong students.we shuld learn to use the modern equipment and learn more knowledge .while a self claimed 18 year old gril may addicted to games.it sounds ridiculous when one does really know the age and the genfer of so called friend.furthermore,it can be risky to make frienfs online. frequent communication and lead to study is getting worse. clearly,it is not wise when u in the school not surf the minternet.but when the smmer and winter vacation is coming we can go there