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初中英语命题作文真题演练(99):Tom的烦恼

发布时间:2014-05-29 17:02浏览次数：502次

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下面是大明写给他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的烦恼。请你以他的朋友Tom的身份，给他写一封80词左右的回信，在信中指出他的问题并给他提出建议。信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,
My classmate, Lucy, bought a new pen. I liked it very much, so I used it without her permission. Unluckily, I broke it. Then I put it back secretly. Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me. I don’t know what to do. Can you help me?
Yours,
Daming
Dear Daming,
I know your problem._________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Tom

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评语：

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；注意文中个别的句子错误；作者词汇表达的灵活性要加强，且注意拼写错误。

用户练习作文：

i am very sorry to use u pen without u persmission which i made a big mistakes so i want to make up my mistakes so that u can forgive me which m that eans never do that again in the future .obviously,u should not be completely rejected my faults.people have the right to use it when necessary,u alo need to realize that it is noot a quick fix for their problems

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