Dear Zhou Tao,
You’re one of my favourite students. In my eyes, _______________________________________________________________________________语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写。
nowadays,a wave of words of advice for graduation seems to sweep ovee the whole society.every yaer,millions of people have it in order to show the best of youeself.u are clever and hard working student as well as u can do well in the exams.u like to help others when they need.after all,what really counts is ones ,s ability integrity and character.also ,it is true that u can also do more sports in spae time