2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦3:宜居城市

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；能够使用一些简单的从句；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

nowadays，some college students have an disire to imagine the city which is like in the future.some express the world is become a better place even though achieved the impossible and urban living standard will improve and peple will live longer than before.the reason behind ths phenomenon are various.first of all,they lack of sense of duty ,many of them are very spoiled and improperly brought up by their parents some suggest that the world will become crowded and the problem of the environment will much .the should have more opportunities to make the energy becoem more.