拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。
There are always some unexpected troubles in our life.In your way to home,you may hit your eggs carelessly.If you put your eggs in one basket,may be you lost all of them.As a result,people learned to put all eggs in some baskets,and as the proverb saying,"It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket". In our life,there are many things that can use that sentence.On the one hand,in the financial market,people put their money into several financial goods instead of in one good for decreasing the loss of money.For example,people save some of their money in banks because of its stability.The rest of money would be put into buying some financial goods for earning money. On the other hand,people will make two plans to fulfill an assignment.For instance,the officers will make a 'Plan A' and a 'Plan B' when they are instructed to fulfill a significant assignment.In this way,Plan B will be used when Plan A has to be canceled with troubles.By this way,they earn more time and make the work could be going on. In our life,people record their precious experience.The sentence,"It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket",helps people decrease many troubles in life and at work.