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文章衔接手法恰当；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。
With the development of the technology, more and more people are use computer for their daily life, the explosion of imformation will impact our daily life. Some people held that "A wealth of infomation creates a poverty of attention." As it seems to me, I think there are many turth in it. The imformation on the Internet are exist fake, sometimes people can't reconcize the truth. Thus they will be cheated by stranger. For instance, many people like shopping online, sometimes they will received the message that they win an expesive gift, they asked them sent their imformation and the money to change the gift. It is unwise to believe a stranger without thinking. In a word, I think we should strengthen our defense, avoid be cheated by other man, we should also watch some news about society, look before your leap.
