2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

As we know,everyone want to be successful man.but success haven't strain road.Therefore, If we want to make great progress in our life. When our just go to the college school.our have to face strange environment and people .Meanwhile,our must overcome a lot of difficulties. As a college student fight for difficulties and hard study.Only in this way can we become a useful man.