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新东方托福高分作文:对家长和孩子来说游戏都同等重要吗?

发布时间:2013-08-06 17:06浏览次数:891
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【题目要求

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

【题目分析

同意这个观点比较容易写。成年人也有娱乐的需求,从繁重的压力中解脱出来(escape),游戏对老年人更是如此。从游戏中可以学到很多东西(桥牌——团队精神;围棋、象棋——拓展智力)
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

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Games are not only full of fun but also entertaining ways of practice skills. In this way it seems that games are both important for children and adults. As for adults, things that they need to learn, come from many sources, like knowledge from books and teachers, work skills from serious practice and working experience, most of ways they can get are far different from the way they can get through games. It is the the difficulty of the skills they need to require to work that make the path getting it became this way. As for kids, most skills they need to get are less serious, like motor skills, intelligence and social skills, all of which can get through games. For instance, we all have play hid and hide during childish, we can get practice of running, timing, searching, hide skills and body coordination from it. And for most of adults, skills like these are already gained. Besides, adults and children take different attitude at games. When I was in kindergarten, most of the arrange are through games, including lessons. As for now, I only play video games after a overtime of working just for relax, or maybe play basketball with my old mates in the weekends. As for my father, he play golf some time, however I think he practice talking skills more than playing skills for the fact that he usually play with his clients, which some of them first met him at the golf courses. Adults take games as competitions and relax sometime a way of approach to other people, while children take games as purely fun. In summary, games are not equally the same to adults and kids, they are both important for adults and children, in different ways.

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