小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Jenny is a good friend of mine. Now she is studying aborad . She likes to go shipping with me in China. she always cares her healthy more.She eats lots of vergetables and fruit, drink milk and some water. sometimes she does Yoge three times a week after class. Every day she wears smile on her face.she thinks to keep happy to do everything well and enjoy life.