在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
Jenny is a good friend of mine. Now she is studying aborad . She likes to go shipping with me in China. she always cares her healthy more.She eats lots of vergetables and fruit, drink milk and some water. sometimes she does Yoge three times a week after class. Every day she wears smile on her face.she thinks to keep happy to do everything well and enjoy life.She likes jogging while she listens to music.