2004年考研英语作文真题:终点又是起点

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；作者在句法层面做的很棒。

Indicated above is an artwork that on the playground runs an athlete, arriving to the finish line, beginning a new journey. Simple as the given image may appear at first glance, its intended meaning goes undoubtedly far-reaching. This great character doubtless, is the steel that forges the supporting structure of this society, which will not be able to grow steady if this invaluable asset is ever neglected in any possible manner. Alibaba Group, founded in 1999, attain a string of prominent feats with some unrivalled products, serve as a shining instance. "It is the insistent spirit that benefits our company to create enormous value to both its shareholders and the general public," says the initiator of the corporation, Jack Ma. Thus it is impossible that without the soul----played a dominating role in individual growth and success----he and his colleagues can ever achieve those marvelous achievements. To sum up, one’s view on his success determines his future. Never than any era of our nation have the stakes involving the insistent spirit been higher than now. It is required to carry out a nation-wide campaign publicizing citizens who have a burning desire for more and ever greater achievement when they are already well-known. The vast majority of us, to be sure, may be more willing to do just that if it could establish a society with democracy, rule of law, justice, stability and order.