小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文中有几处句子错误。

wu jun is my good friend ,she is a nice girl,when i mood in bad,she always gave me a lot of courage,made me happy.last weekend, she went to hefei see me from shanghai,we shopping together,and talk about everything,example family,healthy,job and the past thing and people.we kidding each other,have a nice time.