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I have a good friend. her name is Liu Yuixi.shi is six years old.she is beautful girl. she have big eyes and smour nose.she have long hear.she have a sister.she english study very good.she like eat apple and banana.she a little tall.she by bus go to soolch every day.this is my good friend.