加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a good friend. Her name is Liu Yuixi.Shi is six years old.She is a beautiful girl. Then she has big eyes and small nose.She has long hear.She has a sister.She english study very good.She like eat apple and banana.She a little tall.she by bus go to soolch every day.This is my good friend.