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I have a good friend. Her name is Liu Yuixi.Shi is six years old.She is a beautiful girl. Then she has big eyes and small nose.She has long hair.She has a sister.She is good at English.She like eat apple and banana.She a little tall.she by bus go to soolch every day.This is my good friend.