单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a good friend. Her name is Liu Yuixi.Shi is six years old.She is a beautiful girl. Then she has big eyes and a small nose.She has long hair.She has a sister.She is good at English.She likes apples and bananas.She a little tall.she goes to school by bus every day.This is my good friend.