正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a good friend. Her name is Liu Yuixi.Shi is six years old.She is a beautiful girl.She has big eyes and a small nose.She has long hair.She has a sister.She is good at English.She likes apples and bananas.She a little tall.she goes to school by bus every day.This is my good friend.