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As a student, we have not enough ability to make money by ourselves and we need to get some from our parents. Therefore, be careful about our money in daily life becomes a habit. We collect all kinds of coupons; we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. In this way, we can save some money that is not so necessary to use. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. In my views, they are all good ways for me to help me to save money. On the one hand, I do all i can to cut my costs in my daily life when i am a total concumers. In other words, before i can make a living by myself i will not do those things as much as possible, such as travel and so on. So that my parents will not have so many pressures. On the other hand, collecting coupons can be a interesting thing in such a boring life. It can also gether some people and make them be friends. Such things are ways that people make friends with others. From what have discussed above, it is easy to get a conclusion that the ways that mentiongs above are not only good methords to save money but also good approachs to make friends.
