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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(96):成长是快乐的还是烦恼的

发布时间:2015-04-30 10:30浏览次数:1035
要求:
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Every child has his own dream. Every child hopes to be an adult. All of them think it is a good thing to grow up. However, is it truly like what they imagine? As a boy who lives in modern times, I still clearly remember the happiness of my childhood. What good time we had! We didn’t need to study all the time and our task was to play. We had no worries. Unluckily, we had to face the reality following time’s passing. We began to gradually feel this invisible pressure come upon us. We had less spare time for playing and had to give more of our time for homework. Our stress was coming! We get up before sunrise and return after sunset. We work and study like an adult, even harder. What we do is in order to get an excellent mark. Oh, growing up is extremely boring. Perhaps each child will have or has had the stress of growing up, the most important thing for us is to solve our worries. We must try to find happiness while growing up. I think the friendship among our friends, the support from our parents and the encouragement from our teachers can help us. Let’s have the courage to face these worries and try to solve them. The path of adolescence(青春期) is full of sunshine. Why not enjoy the pleasure of growing up and savor its delicious taste?
[写作内容]
1)概括短文的内容要点,该部分的字数大约60词左右;
2)就“成长是快乐的还是烦恼的”这个主题发表你的看法,至少包括以下的内容要点,该部分的字数大约90词左右;
a)简述你在成长过程中的快乐或烦恼;
b)你对成长的快乐或烦恼的看法。
 [写作要求]
你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。
[评分标准]
概括的准确性、语言的规范性、内容的合适性以及篇章的连贯性。
用户的作文(系统评分48.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;能够运用简单的从句,但不熟练;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

用户练习作文:

In the passage the writer want to tell us that we need't to afarid of growing up although we must to face many problem in the future and we must undertake pressure from work and famile it is a so glad when we are gowing up therefore we must try to find happiness while growing as far as i concerned when you grow up an adult there have no denying the fact that you wii have a lot of problem and pressure but this is an experience we may nerve avoid be-coming old but we can leave a beautiful meromy in our life so long as you are full of confidence and not worriy about anything

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