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Do you remember that you are on campus? If you ask me about this question, I will tell you the answer is "Yes". Our campus is a green campus. When you enter the east gate, you can see the great lake and a hill in the middle of it and a bridge over it. And you can see that a lot of gold fish in the lake. I like these trees around the lake, because I always read English under them every morning. There is a garden beside the lake on the right. You are very pleasure when you go into the garden. All kinds of beautiful flower, there include the reds, yellows, whites, blues, oranges and so on. But, the Sex and Violence on campus. When I go back the dormitory and through the campus at nigh, I always find that the Sex and Violence. Some students to fight each other on Saturday evening. One day, some teens to fight one guy. Hearing of the guy loves a girl, and the girl's boyfriend knows it and calls his friends to fight the guy. But I don't know the result because I go back my dormitory. I hope our campus is green and we create the green campus with all the students.
