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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；文中拼写错误稍多，词汇表达贫乏。
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