文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。
Dear students Recently I found some of students english achievement is not very well , is it for some of students was not interested in english?I have asked several students ,they told me english grammar too difficult to improvement.even they took a lot of time to study ,they think english not useful if they are not plan to go abroad. I tried to encourage and persuade them,their thought was incorrect,in the fact english is an important, now a lot of companies are international company which employee are from different country,all documentation ,email ,and communication with english,english is common communication language.your english will be very well if you want to join this kind of company.here ,I share some of experience how to improve your english. 1.read english newspaper every day 2.write english diary 3.loudly speak english thirty minutes every day .